Christian Sympathy Card Text What Do You Think Of My Poem?

What do you think of my poem? - christian sympathy card text

It came in a condolence card to my uncle, like my great aunt died on Saturday. Were Christians (religious), so this dress?

I wish you were with me
And I could hold her hand
With this sad time
When we are together.

While we are alone,
We receive the gift of God
Who brings the light of our hearts,
Sky are now living.